Colors bruised
the shades of yellow evaporate
her lips swollen with you
scenes she no longer can tolerate .
eyes of a doe , eyes of a doe
winter a cold heaven of snow .
pools of mercury keep
the night collapses deep
teal shadows saturate
unknown dwellers assassinate .
I saw her hold Chopins heart
sealed tight in a glass jar
a song held in her hands … little lark .
eyes of a doe , eyes of a doe
lips frozen with snow .
I see her once more
that wing on her shoulder
a broken limb
his hymn only a pseudonym .
her ballad is lonely
wailing in worship
on and on and on
she waits for the night to retaliate .
eyes of a doe , eyes of a doe
spring seeds beneath the snow .
Paintings by William Turner
Music score : Back to Black Album by Amy Winehouse … Nina Simone , Feelings ( 1976 )
Beautifully sensitive writing and excellent visuals to accompany.
Thank You, Meg, for sharing.
My best to You
john
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Blessings John … For your dear comment I thank you …xx
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Awesome. I like the repetition of ‘eyes of a doe’
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Rajiv , I’ve used this line before in a previous poem about her …I’m glad that you like it … Thank you xx
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May the healing only you can give, touch the agony only her soul knows.
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Thank you Thomas …xx
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Beautifully said and the paintings add to the words!
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dear Christine , thank you …xxx
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Paintings and words, landscapes of beauty obscured by pain. I don’t know her, but I know.
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dear one … Your ” knowing ” heals … love, meg xx
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Sad, beautiful and tragic, all at once. Quite an achievement. “Feelings”, for sure. wow.
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Such a meaningful comment …blessings and love ( I don’t know your first name ?)
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Van (for Vanessa). ☺
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So heartbreaking, sad, poignant, beautiful… so many feelings. I’m so glad you are with her.
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Love you Janet …
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Wonderful Winterland, though morose, as Winter themes can simultaneously be. It reminded me of that song I shared with you the other day! I would say I hope you are doing well, but I will say I hope you are feeling real, as too often people think that to do well is to be numb to uncomfortable feelings, that are healthy to feel in proportionate doses and to communicate in constructive ways, which often simply can be down simply be dwelling. Nostalgia need not be all bad, we would not look back very long unless we wanted to remember, excluding PTSD and OCD experiencers.
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Cyan … That song evoked deep feelings … Real feelings ! Thank you for being you , a beautiful man with songs in his hands …blessings to you Cyan
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Thank you, blessings to you as well Meg!
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looking great 🙂
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Joshi , blessings …xx
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Meg, beautiful yet sends shivers. So glad you are where you are to love and share, to help heal. Talk soon. Carol
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Thank you dear friend …hugs
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I saw her hold Chopin’s heart…Still keeping you both in my prayers.
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Abby … You are so dear …love to you
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we are like a trampoline 🙂 and love to you
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this is very touching, a wonderful concept of sending a great message, powerful words and a good wake up call, showing appreciation!
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Blessings Mino …always xx
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This is very beautiful, haunting even. Lovely work, and the pictures are the perfect compliment to it as well. You have won over sonmi and the Cloud without even trying *smiles*.
-s.u.t.C
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How kind of you sonmi , thank you … I love being on your “cloud ” … Xxx
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stupendous
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